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Old 05-27-05, 11:46 PM   #5
Whyte Ave.
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not the greatest...

Glimmering Hope


Defeated and Drown
An army has fallen
Territory once owned
Has been claimed

The mist shrouds the future
The outline of the enemy
Faintly seen
As the water begins to ripple
Suddenly cracking
A solider has not fallen

Rising from the watery grave
Into the unknown
But known at one time
A new sword, clean, unused
A new battle
A new hope
Optimism gleams
Even if faint

*Mist = Mystery of the future, because the new army has taken over
Enemy: The face of the enemy is not known, what they bring is unknown
The Sword: Clean, which brings new hope and new start
The shining sword: Only thing that is bright in the picture, hope is small