Voted For: Eyetalik
Yo Here it is check it
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Murdz--You were only concieved as a seed in order ta be beat
I'm helpin ya achieve yer destiny by introducin ya to defeat
So bitch take a seat and read as I excrete lyrical heat
Makin ya feel like the Lakers facin a 7 Day losin streak°<<<<Nice multies but pretty weak 1 1/2 bar punch
Cause even if you were gettin head ya couldnt attain brain°°
Just abstain in order ta refrain from lyrical death in this domain
Since I'm insane like a fiend tryin ta obtain bane for his vein°°°
Unleashin a reign ta leave ya slain & put yer body in a sewer drain<<<<<again Nice Multies but punch didnt really hit
Yer like the american idol sleepin with a judge n still couldnt win°°°°
u gona begin bein a has been when I break ya like the wall in Berlin°°°°°<<<<weak Multies and Sorry punch
I make this lightweights head spin like he thin drinkin too much gin°°°°°°
Smack that grin of Eyetalik's face and rename this bitch Frownin'<<<<<kinda lost me on that whats the rhymin word????...but in any case weak punch aight Multies...
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Wall Street---Listen-Kid Your Missing-It, The Point Is Ya Still A Herb
Ya Style Ya Flow Ya Lyrics Ya Name Is Still Un-Heard<<<<Tight punch here
And It's A Proven Fact That Legend's Is Not Living...
Ya Wins Is Like Charity, The Whole Seven Was Given<<<<good punch here also
Getting Votes Not Unless Tha Q Becomes Straight-Kid
You Dope? That's Like Saying 50 Cent Aint Overated<<<<RREEEALL nice Punch here
I Don't Mean To Expose You But You A Wanna-Be-MC
You Winning.. Is 1 Out Of A Mill Like Lottery- Entries<<<great punch here
You Remind Me Of Some Weed You Symbolize Herbs
Kid's So Original He Had To Recycle The Name Murdz*<<<<another great punch
Couldn't Drop 'Dope Shi't With 'Coke' In His Crack' HA
Only Time He Pack Is 'Picnics' I'd Put A Hole In His 'Sack'<<<<,great Multies good punch
He Couldn't Elevate If He Boarded A Plain To New York
Only Time This 'Gangster Had Beef' Is At A 'Food Court'*<<<pretty basic but stil a good punch
His Flow Isn't Noticeable..Like Hawaii On A Map-Son
I'd Leave This Coward Devoured This Is A Wrap-One<<<<<Nice closer nice multies nice punch
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Murds i feel that you are relying to much on Multies chill out wit them try to hit some punches up....Not bad structure but still work on that.....that last line was too long u couldent understand it.....but any way .....nice drop...
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Wall Street---no real advise for you other then work on them multies...
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Ok Punches almost alwase win and this is one of those times.....i felt like Murdz didnt hit him with near enough of them, nice multies but punches win battles so there fore i gotta go with Street.....and i expect this to be a preety one sided affair...Peayce