o.k this was pretty dope y'all

mad - nice flow and lyrics were pretty gud too, didnt feel a great presense on this piece but overall nice dawg

creative - flow was gud and i liked your presense on this track cos you had it there but kept a gud amount of emotion in there to, lyrics on point so overall dope

E.C - ur improvin man, the weakest of the three but still pretty gud, lyrics were pretty dope and emotion was there, just felt ya flow went off in places slightly and presense wasn't great but that will come with time

verdict - nice piece

pz

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