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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
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Aiight Man Pretty Nice Shit Came All Creative In This Verse, You Came Good With Structure As Well This Battles Was Pointless You Killed It Man, Punch Lines We're Hitting Him Hard, You Even Had Good Word Play Shit Was Hott Fam, Your Personals Was There, All Hitting Hard, Very Nice Verse Man Creative Punch Lines mostly All Original Shit I See From You
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Aiight You Came Cool And Originals Structure Was Fucked Don't Seperate The Bars We Know Where Each Bar Ends, Man, Also You Had Some Okay Personals Creative Shit, Punch Lines Was Cool, Again Creative But Not Hitting Your Opponent Hard Enough To Win, Your Vocabulary Was Kind Of Basic Man, Nothing Stood Out As Much As Marv's Verse Did
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