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You Cant Handle The Truth
From: in the streets fighting |
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aiight this was kewl, but ya flow could be better though...maybe it's cuz i'm used to audio or reading things that can really be rapped out loud..your battles are better...seems like you put more into those than you do to your OM's...think of everything as a competition and it'll be as close to 100% as you can be 
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"Ya Blood'll Drip On Paper Towels In Da Woods....Like BOUNTY-HUNTIN!"
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good line, never heard that before
oh, you structure is kinda off, to end lines before the rhyme in the bar actually comes in..make sure that where you end the line and hit "enter" to start the next line, is where the rhyming word is at, cuz it confuses people a lot when you don't...keep it up babe  ...
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Originally Posted by Artik Phrost
LV - real talk as usual..dope shit
you're like the best story teller over a beat
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Originally Posted by PhaseOne
my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.
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