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Old 05-28-05, 06:58 PM   #4
Paranoid
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holy shit juelz you really learned a lot through shawty man your elevation is superior the stuctures from both of you was identicle your flow is very good good complexity inner rhyme scheme from both of you was not bad i thought shawty was more complex with the inner rhyme scheme but the outter rhyme scheme was good for both equally matched this was a very good piece from both of you.

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