Both had a good piece, I know picture matches aren't the easiest...

Elementality: you had excellent vocab which expressed a nice level of emotion but strongest aspect was the imagery in my opinion. You managed to portray the scene as if it was a movie combined with strong emotion. Kept readers focussed, had such a poetic vibe over it. Favo line is the last one, excellent drop!

Whyte Ave.: I feel you had stronger emotion than imagery, I like how you portrayed the sword as new hope, new start. Imagery was good as well but the emotion was best aspect of your piece. Had more basic viocab than Elementality but it pictured a serene scene which I liked.

In the end my vote goes to Elementality because I feel his imagery was excellent and his emotion was strong too. Whyte Ave., you had a great piece as well, nice topic approach. Was most definitely a close battle!

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