Good battle right here...

Lyriclesolja: like how you approached the topic in a more abstract way, makes reader think about it a bit more. Vocab was simple but it made the drop more powerful. I feel it's more an emotional piece than a imagery one...Was definitely an interesting read.*

(Jimmy Pocketz): nice drop here, had strong emotion as well as nice imagery. Vocab was excellent, right on point. I love the last lines how they soothe the person, letting them know they have to be patient and all. Was a nice twist right there, excellent piece...

My vote goes to (Jimmy Pocketz) because I feel he managed to combine imagery and emotion so well, no hate to Lyriclesolja though!

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