Of course, the strongest aspect of this piece is the emotion, was so pure and serene. The chorus was very nice, that must be my favorite part of the piece because it sums it all up and is packed with emotion. It's good that you can write about it. Imagery was on point as well as flow, kept vocab simple which gave the piece a powerful yet serene vibe.

I'm sorry about your grandpa, may he rest in peace and may his spirit live on within your hearts. Sorry about ya girl too, maybe you can still work it out...

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