RapVerse.com Community - View Single Post - Whyte Ave. vs. Elementality

Elementality-Alright man, nice vocab. The emotion was good too, but the strongest aspect of your piece was the imaginary, I felt the your poem like an slide-show or somthin.

Whyte Ave- What's good bruh?...Ah see you on rb . Alright nice piece man, you had good work on the imaginary not like Elemnetality though, i liked the emotion which was the best aspect of your verse. Upp on the vocab, you must've quick key'd on this did you?...

Overall=My vote goes to Elementality yo, cause he had good imaginary, stronger emotion with the strong vocab also. The way he approach the topic was good. Whyte ave, you lost my vote by not having good imaginary nor stronger emotion, upp your vocab....Yo Keep dropping....

PS-WHYTE AVE?....WHY YOU AIN'T IN SS NO MORE?........

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