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Old 05-29-05, 11:06 AM   #1
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From: decatur ga
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

i'll stomp your face on the ground - so you'll be feeling like dirt
plus u getting smacked w/ a globe - so u just left in a world of hurt
da second line is coo but d first wasnt

u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep
& ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat
1st line was solkid but d second is uncreative

There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay
Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway
that is just whack, d first line was horrible and d second wasnt much better

Please kid just give it up - cuz in this battle - I'm a stalker
But once Khaoz took me to school - I pushed his ass in the locker
didnt relly rhyme that well but it was cool

I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself
& you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself
weak closer niga

d verse was average alot of uncreative rhymes in d verse an da bars wasnt effective


Thought U Wuz Gonna Be A Challenge, So I Had 2 Accept
U Callin Out Newbies? Cuz Ya Flowz Sunk Now Ya Ship Wrecked
not a good opener


HeavyWeight Champ? Bitch Aint Rocky, Or Even A ''Contender''
EZ Win? Nup, Fake MC Culdnt ''Pull Da Stringz'' If I Handed Him A Fender
very good personal/punchline it was d highlight of d battle

Bend-Ya Barz, Cuz They Aint Straight, Like Yo Persona
Ur Copyrighted By Khaos, Bcuz U Know I Just Owned-Ya
could of been alot better


Now I'll Disown-Ya, Put U Up For Adoption, Losingz Ya Only Option
I Heard Yo Name Wuz ''Cherry-Red'' Cuz Da ''Pussy'' Stays ''Poppin''
that is alot bettr really good punchline and metaphour here

Flowz Is Played Out, Pleaze Dont ''Bust-a-Rhyme'' Just ''Stay-Out''
Yo Verses Aint Goin 2 Plan, Lyke U Just Lost The ''Lay-Out''
pretty decent closer

Khaoz Theorys verse was d better one his punchlines was more creative and original and d wordplay was good. skriptz had t many uncreative uneffective rhymes an his punchlines were off good battl doh homeys