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Old 05-29-05, 11:37 AM   #56
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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

MC Hammer must be his idol.. & ur punches are sounded dim
They say he was born w/ illness.. too bad it wore off of him
Ur not really into females.. so no wonder that they stay far
..from you.. & ur last shot @ greatness.. was in a gay bar
So while ur up in there.. all you serving is gay men
Cuz.. the closet route for u.. to getting skills.. is under construction
Leaving you scared & lost.. and I’m hittin u with these bars
Only way u’ll get votes..
..Is cuz ur wackness .. got Rv members laughin so hard
Well.. he told us that he was offically gay .. so lets all make fun
..of him.. he knew accidents happen.. but u was made as one

Yo Some Iight Linez In There Skriptzz, Good Punches, Flow Wuz On Point, Structure Wuz EZ 2 Follow. Culd Of Used Better Vocab An Better Wordplay, Overral Not A Bad Verse 27/50, Keep Em Comin Dawg


Your lyrics are trash filled, talk shit? Get ya ass killed
Watch me "rip 'skriptz' into pieces" like a "bad film" *
Your raps is sour, and your style is used and played
Plus you get more "boo's" on stage, than at "happy hour" **
The hottest rapper? Please, you're shit is far from AVERAGE!
So watch me "take ya top off" like an "exotic dancer"
You hate Im on top, thats why you tried escaping this drop ***
Shit, you couldn't "deliver hot" if it "came in a box" ****
You're the type who "writes early" and the only way this kid might merk me
..............Is because all of RV is "on his dick" like "herpes" *****

Yo Da Personalz Wuz Tite Man, Puncez Wuz Damn Near Flawless2. Structure Wuz Good, Flow Wuz On Point, Really Liked Da Openner & Dat ''Boo'' Line, Good Verse Dawg, Ya Personalz Hit Harder Than Da Homeboy Skriptz, Vote/Black Magik

Plz Return Da Favor In Mah Signature

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