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Old 05-29-05, 11:56 AM   #2
Sean Gunner
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Wall Street- Aight, structure is like perfect, too bad that doesn't matter. Punches were ok, some are kind of played. Tha Q punch is played, period. Had a couple of personals in there, but overall I think you could have came a lot harder. One thing of wordplay, work on putting in more wordplay and personals.

Murdz- The thing that lost this battle for you is that you had no personals, at all. Only punches do not win battles. Your punches were bad at some points, and ok at others. The only time you even mentioned his name was your last name, and it was bad. Eyetalik to Frownin? Wtf? I think you need to work on putting in more personals, and not so many punches. Put some wordplay in there too.

Overall both of you need to work on personals and wordplay.
(RTF please)

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