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Old 05-29-05, 12:05 PM   #9
Sean Gunner
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Voted For: Saskilla

Weak battle overall.

Prem- No real punches in your verse. Any punch you had was rather weak, and no real personals. No real wordplay, no multis, really nothing in your verse. You self glorified as well. Voting punch was weak, the only real bar I liked was the first. But mom punches are played as well.

Sas- Not a great verse overall, but your punches hit harder as well as your personal did. You started going downhil when you switched up your structure. Your Prem personal was the best part of your verse. Work on putting more personals in your verses.

Overall both of you came rather weak, and need to work on personals.
(RTF)

v- Saskilla
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