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Old 05-29-05, 12:10 PM   #2
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

Skriptz:

One of the better drops from you. Punches were decent, but really could've hit him harder. I liked your locker line and the tripping over the doorway line tho. Funny shit. Personals were spread around, you had a few, but they weren't hitting when they needed to. Had a couple of played punches. Work on your creativity and consistency.

KhAoZ ThEoRy:

Very nice verse. I was kind of surprised. Punches hit him where it hurt, personals were pretty decent, and you had some nice meta's in there. Take out the slashes and shit tho, because that is herbish. We do not need those to be able to find your flow. Both verses flowed fine, but KhAoZ gets the vote for his consistency and an overall better verse.

V/ KhAoZ ThEoRy

RTF and hit up my battle with MarvJay1009 and drop an honest vote. It is in the Frontlines Forum.

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