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Old 05-29-05, 12:22 PM   #11
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From: In A Guttah
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Voted For: Premanition

Ur ‘expressionless’, drawin blanks like tracin ya ‘face’
Ya mum only gave birth cos you were wastin her space
New to these surroundings, adjusting like blind babies
Shit when it comes to voting your even behind ladies
Hope to fuck your reading this cos seeing is believing
Give sas a piece of his own, but im preferable 2 bleedin
challenge me? Damn! You must be opposed to victory
Infact its quite intelligent, now you’ll go down in history

Yo Dat Verse Wuz Tite Dawg, Nice Punchez & Metaphours, Sum Basic Wordplay Tho, But It Wuz Styll Effective Enough, Real Dope Flow An Da Structure Lookin Lyke A Box, Good Job.


Prem's left cluthing at a broken future, & searching for inspirations attack.
Having said that, ya like a injecting farmer lookin for a needle inna haystack.
Ya inferior Prem, ya texting attributes are jus worthless.
& I kno P forsaw the L, so if my fate is merking you, jus watch me serve my purpose.
Don't try and fight it Prem, don't make ya demise delayed.
Cuz ya doom will be delivered...
Like you ordered the game from ebay!*
I'll uppercut ya chin & knock out ya tooth.
Cuz I be callin the shots..
Like the sniper outta "Phone Booth"!..**

Yo I Saw Dat Needle In A Haystack Line Sumwhere Else On Diz Site, But Wateva Yo, Ya' Verse Wuz Iight, Personalz Didnt Have Az Much Effect Az Premantiton, Flow Wuz Tite, Wordplay Fo Da Most Part Wuz Better Than Premanitions.

Vote/ Premanition, Much Harder Personalz & Punchez, Creative Wordplay Went 2 Saskilla, But Hiz Verse Wuznt As Consistant Az Premanition

Plz Return Da Vote, Links R In Da Signature, Pz Out.
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