Voted For: Mad Dog
this pussy ain't a contender so im'a shred this puppy like a blender
fucking faggot this guy is wack as fuck on a microphone he's a bender
3...decent use of multies, but the overall punch was lacking, and the played concept didnt help at all!!
crawly is a shit hole and your rapping really is so iritating
so just quit all that audio cuz your not a rapper in the making
4...not played, but the setup is more moaning than punching him, and the punchline was far too basic!!
my flows will put you 6 feet under next to your grandma's corpse
i love pissing you off because all you ever do is bitch talk
4...ok, this was weak, i mean you love pisisng him off cuz he bitch talks, that is sumthin that a kid would drop!!
this dude can't even walk so i'll rip his spine out 2 make him worse
his family are a buch of nerds and they are the biggest bitches of earth
3...what the fuck!!! the first line was weak but then the 2nd line was pure bullshit!!! try punching ya opponent instead of talkin a load of shit!!
he has a son but when he grows i'll shoot his ass wid guns
when you step up 2 the master your ass is always gonna get sonned
3...more shit talkin!! and i do believe that you self-glorified, not the worst kind of glorifying but still it is played like fuck!!
your a bitch made so let me take a pin out my granade n throw it in ur face
all you are is a waste of space so i'll beat you 2 death wid a suitcase
4...beat to death with a suitcase!!! come on son, a battle is supposed to be about dissin ya opponent!! not about idle internet threats!!
that picture of you scared me sling your hook before i put u in a cemetary
cuz nobody is more uglier den you shouldn't be in the dark cuz ur scary
2...2nd line makes no sense, i mean if he is ugly and scary that he SHOULD be in the dark!! little mix up of words there!!
don't think your gonna win this because i'll be damned if i lose to you
but before you get KO'd im the one that you'll commit suicide to
3...aight the suicide deal is wack, its been done so many times before and this wasn't even a good way of using a played concept so NO!!
OVERALL: 26/80
This must be part one thousand 2 hundred and seventy nine,
Ya been whored so many times i'm surprised his ass isn't wide,
4...ok this was a weak opener, the whole number deal in the setup was weak filler, and the punchline was kinda played!!
accomplish...tell me what is you've actually done in ya life?,
Ya don't belong on this site ya punch weight is light and all ya do is entice,
5...ok use of multies, but again the setup was borderline between wack and good.....and then the punch just wasn't hitting!!
When you whinge and whine all the time And theres ya audio,
Tried to spit but deleted ya soundclick coz of ya horrid flow,
5...finally a punch....but you came pretty basic and ya rhymin wasn't the best, ya cud've thrown in some wordplay or sumthin to make it more creative!!
Oh if you haven't guessed already people this is Sinner i'm dissing,
So get ready for the same old senseless shit he's always spittin,
5...first line was wack, if it is Sinner ya cud've done a nice diss on the old name or sumthin, instead ya just made a statement sayin it was him and the punch was more filler!!
He's had a REAL hard life and everyone around him hates him,
He worships Em like he's a country and Sinners an angry patron,
5...personally, eminem lines are gay and played, you came pretty basic and the setup was just bleh!!
His real records got over 90 losses overall, ya suck is all i gotta say,
Ya battle as regular as C.A.L.I...but ya records the other way,
6...LoL!!! this was actually an ok punch, ya dissed him here and it actually hit, but ya need to up the wordplay or sumthin!!
Still gettin bullied...or have you manned up to them dudes?,
Prolly got smashed up bog washed and left locked in the loos,
5...an ok bit of wordplay in the 2nd line, the vocabs were too basic and really ya not bringin anything original!!!
Hold up that's kinda like Eminem in that track Brain Damage,
Ya one beating there and another one...rap & Sinner jus don't manage,
5...weak closer, ya played on the whole eminem thing again and it didnt work the first time so it aint gonna work now!!!
OVERALL: 40/80
This battle was real weak!!!
Accomplish had a lot of shit talkin and useless filler and i dont think he brought a single punch, mad dog came weak, some played concepts, no real wordplay or anythin overly creative, but if this is Sinner he was battling i can understand why he didnt try that much, Sinner seriously needs to elevate and Mad Dog i know ya capable of better shit than that!!!
V/ - Mad Dog
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