word, hmm, tough choice, actually

so im going to break it down to endings......and i was really feeling DQ's ending a little more, because it just left me to think ya know......like whoa, thats cool, and just leaves the whole piece to settle in nicely.....emotion was pure, imagery was what stood out here, and i think thats the most important thing

solo, i just think you went for pure entertainment on this one, i liked the way you did this one, but i didn't like your finisher, as much as it was a little funny, and then the last two lines were pretty corny, lol.....but overall, it was an enteraining piece, just feel more thought went into DQ's and it stood out a little more

word, props to both, v/DQ

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