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Old 05-29-05, 05:36 PM   #12
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Voted For: Fumin

I could list all 9th's defaults, but I honestly don't know where to begin.
So this ignoramus hacked into my desk theme, just to get under my skin.
^^ not worded as a punch... if u said his disses hacked into ya desk top and couldn't get under your skin... it'd be a diss 5/10
Blasting concepts so weak, and throwing punches so played.
Accepting this battle, will have you receiving the opposite of OK’ed!
good wordplay but selfglorifying 5/10
I'll pick at your verse, and leave your wackness cavities exposed.
So ill leave 9th drowning in sorrow, when my punches break the bridge of his nose!
^^good wordplay but s/g agian, aslo i think i seen a line very similar to that before 5/10
When you see my drop, clutch ya clovers and try to remain brave.
After I throw him through a window of opportunity & into a world of pane.
^^5/10.. s/g... sayin what your ganna do isn't a punch, good wordplay, but not a punch, u gotta make fun of him not just say clever things

9th..

You winning this is a longshot, and you're not about to zoom in
'Cuz most newbs stink, but god damn kid, you're Fumin!
denect, name play personal, and a diss, not s/g
Record's built up of a no-show, which is lucky for your chump rhymes
Those fighting stick figures are your only decent punchlines
^^ dont get the punch but its not s/g so thats still good
But maybe that avy's supposed to show you're so hard
Fuck it, I'ma get rid of F like I got a bad report card
^^ s/g, and i dont like using letter plays of names... not feelin
I keyed quick, now I'll just wait for your verse
'Cuz we're all excited to see you drop...off the face of the earth
^^decent, not a very direct punch, but still a diss and not s/g

vote 9th- for not havin as many s/g lines and a couple of decent bars with personals wordplay punches.
fumin- try dissin your opponet more and not just sayin witty shit. good wordplay and shit, but get more direct with your punches


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