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Old 05-30-05, 12:39 AM   #45
MiSk
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Voted For: Re~Verb

Vote: Re~Verb

Verb your punchs were harder. Flow was much better, wordplay was much better. Good vocabulary. Your opener and closer could of been a little better.

data first of all your structure was bad...no hate... just work on that a little... the "hand him.." line is mad played... a lot of your bars are stretched.


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