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Old 05-30-05, 01:16 AM   #9
Kawn Flixx
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This was a pretty good i thought it could have been alot better structure was okay, some people need to learn how to make ya flow on point... If you have lines that are stretched and some sorta it aint gonna have avery good flow...and probably off beat...yea but anyway had some nice punchlines , some good concepts , pretty good wordplay and vocab , Overall keep it up nice drop
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