This shit was pretty good. I agree fluid had almost no imagery at all, which is what i look for, but the emotion carried her shit, I dunno how kids miss that... troops I thought was the opposite, lots of imagery, and no emotion or relevance to it... I liked this, but think that a balance of imagery and emotion would have been better, you balance each other, but I would have liked more imagery from fluid cuz she's real good at that and it is something I look for, and I wish troop came w/ more relevance and feeling, cuz it felt like he was just writing fact, more than feeling... this was good though, no reason to hate here. 1

__________________