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Eph: I liked your approach on this topic. I wasn't sure how you would tie Beneath the Waves in with Grandpa which made me keep reading. Your emtion was good, and your imagery for the feelings was very nice. Overall, I think your flow, emotion, and imagery won this for you.

NNN: Eh, not a bad approach of the topic, but nothing that kept me on the edge of my chair. Your vocab was ok, but your flow seemed really choppy to me. Your imagery was ok in the beginning, but began falling bout halfway through the verse. The multis helped your flow a little, but nothing that great. Overall nothing that great in this verse. I did like your emotion and the feeling of hopelessness and frustration.

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