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Old 05-30-05, 01:08 PM   #2
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beat is koo
quaily is bad, ur vocals need to be upped and u have no mic presence, like u afraid of the mic. Flow is average, lyrics are ok, nothig special
emotion needs to be upped in certain spots, delevery needs work

Chorus wif samples and all dat is koo

2nd verse, same as 1st

practice ur timing, delevery and lyrics
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