qualuty can be upped, beat seems koo, i see where u going wif it
intro or w/e it was was ight

Emotion should have went up when u started the verse, i see you tryed to switch up delevery, needed more presence. Dubs and adlibs sound good wif beat, lyrics are ight, but gets boring cuz of montone and lack of flow and or delevery switch ups.

6/10

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