Submerged blues taint the anger, two opposites lock infernal horns.
Intelligence my only defense ; but still Im impregnated by disgruntled thorns.

Yeah thats pretty ill i like the visual connotations

State of mind now fragile, what is going on around me? Ive returned to reality.
But it all seemed so real, the scale of collosal warfare for the sake of sanity.

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Nicest piece ive actually seen on here so far some dope visuals that got me thinking, also some good attempts at metaphor's (hope u meant them lol) perhaps could work on flow abit seemed abit off in places nothing a simple re-word couldnt fix though
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