good story tellin....u got some talent but what will really make u good is if you use more complex words dawg....ur rhymin "boot" with "shoot"........now if u want ta really sound good try ur best ta use as much complex multi's that rhyme as much as possible.......for example " im gettin so well known that i cant become hesitant ta become president even if i cant rap without the press in it" i just made sumthin up ta show ya what i meant...now that's better than sayin " i use rap ta get through all this crap"...otherwise this open mic probally would be a lower score but since u were really good at story tellin that shit helped ya a little...so i'll give this shit a 6/10....try not ta be as basic next time...peez