Voted For: GKillaz05

me, GK got this

>When I crush this fuck, GKillaz will be resting in the ocean.
N I don't know what's worse, ya verse, or the fact that ya posting.
set-up was whack...filler...not a bad punch 5/10
>Watch my punches unfold, grab ya attention n the magic disperse.
Because you know ya gonna say I'm fulla shit, AFTER I ate ya verse.
not bad, wording was off a little 6/10
>I'll squash this chump, my heavy bar's ain't neede to kill this bitch.
The way I shut this fucking dummy up, you'd think I was a ventriloquist.
lol, not bad, set up was stupid though, self-glor 6/10
>I'm fuming I'll clamp down on this fool, fuck what ya story is.
Because all ya avy did, was make B.I.G. a little less notorius.
meh, too basic, didn't really fit your verse 5/10

overall: 22/40......meh, not bad, i thought some of your set-ups coulda been better, and wordplay was really hurting the effectiveness of your punches, you coulda easily taken this replacin opener or closer with a better concept, keep up.


>Saskilla's fast to use a filla in all of his whack spits...
You explain to much shit and your flow is whack as it gets...
meh, basic, 4/10
>Im takin' a shit on this fool like he was the damn toilet...
Only time you spits are sick, is when you punches spoil it...
lol, nice punch 8/10
>Treat this like a royal spit, im the king your just a jester...
Your lyrics are not goin' to pass, like failin' a semester...
not bad 6/10
>Blowin' up your bars like uncle fester, you cant fight back...
I'd KO his ass right now but I think this bitch might rat...
meh, 5/10

overall: 23/40...like i said, this shit coulda gone either way, you had a really weak opener, but you had that nice punch in the middle, made me laugh, haha........plus you were more consistent, better structure, flow was bang on.....decent wordplay...you just edged this one out in my books

v/gkillas

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