Originally Posted by lyricalflowz

listening. Beat is decent. Haha rhymes are hot. Flow is good for the most part. Kinda going for an Eminem type flow huh? Sort of like Till' I Collapse? Hook is alright. This is really good for your first track, I'd up quality a bit though. Lyrics are hott though. You got some nice ass wordplay, and metaphors. You got like an animation flow. Kinda get crazy with it. THat's good, but sometimes its blah. Yeah it does cut off, but this was pretty good for a first drop.