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Old 05-30-05, 06:15 PM   #6
Kawn Flixx
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^Same avy?...But yeah this was a very good drop..
It had very nice , and very strong imagery.. really
Creative words that grabbed the readers attention..
you had nice wordplay pretty good vocab , nice structure
and no line stretched more then the other , sometimes it fell off..
Flow was good , Overall this was a nother nice drop from you Drakel.
Keep it up ,
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