I'll be quick to kick-ya-ass without havin' to battle-ya-behind
if I knew I'd be up against a pussy, I'da battled-a-feline

Ok opener

remember me after I dismember your rhymes an' snap-ya-words
cuz after I'm finished you'll be left wit halfa-verse

Pretty weak but ok

if gats-were-words- you'd be left holier than the Bible
I freeze rivals then dance in circles round 'em like a ballet recital

Simple+played concept

this man'll be left capped like he just put a hat-on
layin' in the street soakin' up his blood like a tampon

Lol nice

this bitch gunna get jumped on like a worn out matress
his delivery missed me like Fed-Ex had the wrong address

Again needs re-wording to hit

Tim Dim has no wordplay cuz I benched-his-words
his rhymes used to be hot until I drenched-his-verse

Solid closer

NEXT

This herbz going to get burns when he steps to the hot plate
Murdz got RV confused cause his not a crook and he's not straight

Ok

I was neva your friend I just played you like your bitch did
Your wack admit it dipshit, I'll have you ripped quick

Filler of a punch , str8 build up though

Fuck this foolish white kid that says the N word to fit into a website
This dude may have a fat ass but his not Jlo and he won't get right

Weak

Rap isn’t a test if I’ve got fuck wit you to fuck with the best
I’ll leave ya broken hearted like pun after his cardiac arrest

Another simple simile, too indirect

Beat me? Must be joking right, stick to ballin and open mics
If you refer to me as herb you must mean the type you toke in pipes

No man

Your beat like a drum LL’s full of wack mc’s you fit in just right son
Your not nice chum your so lyrically small you’re text in battles is size 1

Decent

voted for murdz please return honest feed on mine

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