Voted For: Chief



It’s like you’re disabled, oh that’s why you can’t rap or sing
You couldn’t take the trash out even if you jumped in the bin

Lol funny + ok hit

Ayo Josh, golly gosh, look opening bars and you’ve already lost
Gonna kill?man if I were a “sport” I still couldn’t get “squashed”


Needed re-wording good concept though

Check this Six to unlimited rows of combined rhymes and words
you ain’t stronger, no longer own part of rap like Paul Rosenberg

Weak + too indirect

I’m eating you now, all the crowd can hear is a bunch of crunches
I call you the broke “lemon stand man”, you can’t throw “punches”

Lol Igght

You just the old prehistoric creature who eats any kind of “meat”
That’s why I offered this battle to the creep and it accepted “defeat”

defeat lines = filler now

You wacker than getting whacked in the jaw to brake your frame
Buddy you have an “ugly face” so you’ll never be “a head” of the game

Safe

You cheating eating a “phone” and spewing it back up to spit “lines”
Come on dawg you ain’t original that’s why you’re josh654,789

Str8 personal

NEXT

iight chief imma cook you like a chief,
aint even gotta pop ya, ta put ya body ta rest,
i aint even gotta kill ya by shootin ya in the chest,
so fuck a vest, you tryin ta school me, you know i passed the test,
have you drinkin so much you passed out,
we both know you butt, kuz you assed out,

i be posted on the block like a street sign,
you tryin ta hustle, so imma take mines,
have you runnin so i pop your spine,
you fucked now, kuz you used your last life line,
imma roast you like jada did fifty,
dont think i wont come after ya jus kuz im tipsy,
yea so wut if im drunk,you tryin ta stunt,
ended up wit your best boys body in the trunk.
put a price on your head,
dont need ta kill you, somebody else gonna end up dead,
($)1,000 , your kid duct taped and fucked her in the mouth,
($)2 G's, your wife never seen again but nothin to brag about,
3 thousand, your best friend found naked and decapitated,
($)4 G, your broke ass buried alive kuz ur ass hate it,
($)5 thousand, you aint even worth it, imma kill ya nigga myself,
kuz im the closest ta stardom then any of ya niggas felt

Ok basicaly i tried to break this down but the structure was fucked up almost u went off bragging + Filler maybe a bit of a song of filler i dont know def not a battle verse thought

Voted for chief
Chief please would you return an unbiased favour on me vs accomplish

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