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dude, you wack like Cool J songs, might as well drop it all
No skills, just headsprung, hey... its somethin like a phenom in all

Pretty dope

im bombin yall, like evictions bitch, get the hell out
as nice as the new star wars movies, cuz you just a fuckin sellout...

Lol ight

you lookin scared while im flexin this knife, im perplexin his mic
hows he winnin this fight? he aint neva battled text in his life

Ok personal no real connection though

Jay Z's a phenomenon... while you admitted you was gay and wack
blood turns dark after a while, so maybe we'll love it when you fade to black...

I like the concept but this could of been doone soooooo nice still a str8 hit

this man's the K O King? i wrestle and beat fools, you aint been betta
you couldnt rap a decent punch usin characters from Def Jam, Vendetta

Blah too indirect and weak

NEXT

I'm real, you want attention like children-singers
I drop Fux.. like I'm cuttin off middle-fingers

Lol nice

I'd fly-down to chi-town, just to say goodbye-clown
so why-pout, when my-mouth, will make you all out cry-now

Weak

Fought to buy back ya no-show, cause ya record is so-so
like cali wavin a : nono : , you got no chance you homo

Weak

C'mon-I-hate-text, make this a song-and-make-tracks
You so fem, the only time you rule is as a Dom-in-a-trix

Ight

I'ma wrap this up, like I forgot to, your girls holdin my seed
don't do like you did in the tourny - be bold, and don't feed

Ok personal

Next time lets do audio, cause we know I bust-on-herbs
you couldn't touch me audio or text, so fux just-a-word

Needed re-wording

Vted for fux because his verse was more consistant
Both please return the unbiased favour on me vs accomplish thanks

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