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Old 05-31-05, 09:36 AM   #15
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Voted For: 9th Degree

Yo Diz Wuzza Hot Battle, Propps All

9th Degree=
Much More Complex Verse, Yo Personalz & Witty Wordplay Stood Out, Nice Arrogant Rhyme Scheme, It Gave U An Edge & U Basically Made A Mockery Ov Fumin Wit'cha Witty, Arrogant Punchlinez, Real Nice Drop

Fumin=
Yo Verse Wuz Iight, Nuthin Out Ov Da Ordinary, Good Wordplay, But U Lacked In Personalz, Where Az 9th Wuz Droppin em Lyke There Aint Nuthin 2 It, U Culd Use A Lil Work On Ur Choice Ov Punchez & Da Way U Diss Ur Oppenent

Fav Bar=
''You winning this is a longshot, and you're not about to zoom in
'Cuz most newbs stink, but god damn kid, you're fumin!''

Propps 2 Yall, Keep Doin Yo Thang


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