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Old 05-31-05, 09:50 AM   #27
Daubs
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

dis kid's fruity his own sister lends him a skirt,i remember dis jerk!
he got banned from RaP KNOWLEDGE for bitin mimesis verse.*

NICE PUNCH, DOPE PERSONAL

been on rv 2 years still no1 notice dis clown,when im holdin da pound.
talk slick ima do like "dogs in back yard's" & put "BONE in da ground".

NICE NAMEPLAY, GOOD PUNCH

ima make dis hoe hurt,punchlines aint u they just made ya flow worst.
do any1 remember dis kid when he was iNDEPH,B.L.A or PROVERSE?

NICE OPENER, WANST FEELIN THE PUNCH...

no..ya like da "garbage train"..ya "tracks" are all "trash".
when i break BONEs i dont mean da "weather" but u gon "four-cast".

HAHAHHAHA.. VERY NICE PUNCH

your gassed!...gettin fame battlin noobs whut da fuck u doin.
like u got "cpu problems" cuzz with a 'gun' in ya fist u got "trouble-shootin".

LMAO...GOOD WORDPLAY.

dude stop..u'll neva be b.i.g or even 2 pac..watch you flop.
da only time u'll be "ON da radio" is "sittin on ya boom box".

NICE CLOSER, SUMS UP0 A GOOD VERSE.

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I'll Drop A Bomb.. We All Know 1009 Is A Long Way Gone.. Bone Will Murder This Guy-Dirty.....
I'll BE Drunk On Baccardy.. But Sover Enough To Know That Jay/YAY Is Only Popular On Surpise-Partys!!..

NICE OPENER..WASNT FEELIN PUNCH TOO MUCH, AND DID IT RHYME? DINT IN MY ACCENT.

I Got Knifes And Guns.. Marv Be Ready-To-Feel-Them.. You Locked In My Bars.. And You Aint Heading-Towards-Freedom..
You Dont Have To Be Smart To Know That *Nightmare is only dangerous* When Freedy-Is-In-Them!!.. (User Tittle)

KINDA SELF GLORIFICATION AT FIRST, BUT GOOD PUNCH AND WORDPLAY.

Dawg Foreal.. No-Hate.. Bones Will Crush Your Thoughs, Leaving You Completely Empty On Ya Souls-Fate..
I Aint A Math Teacher.. But I Know That On A Downscale *I AM After 10-09*.. Like 0-8!!.. (Think About It)*

PRETTY NICE PERONAL...

I'm Fast With Punches Like Tyson On A Corvette.. Massing With Bones?.. Holmes... That You'LL Regret..
You'll- Fall In This Thead.. That Hes *Initials Are M.J*.. Dont Mean This Guy Got Balls On The Net!!.. (OMG KO)

YEA, HIT....

Get off the fucking net you damn nerd...get your self a life..Cus the only ill you'd Get Is If You Caught H.I.V.
...................Wait i forget you cant get a girl , Cus the Only way Marv feel's complete is by coming to R.V**

NICE PERSONAL, ALTHOUGH THE SET UP IS THE MOST PLAYED CONCEPT EVER.

you can tell he bites,just Look How Fat His Stomach Looks,Cus after reading my verse Marvs gonna be well shook
Im Throughin a fire punchlines that changes into a hook,So Watch Me Drop ''Marv'el,Like Fallin Comic Books...

NICE CLOSER.

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THIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE, BOTH CAME WITH GOOD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS.. BOTH FLOWED WELL, BUT BONES LINES SEEM A LITTLE STRETCHED TO ME..

MARV GETS MY VOTE DUE TO HARDER HITTING PUNCHES AND PERSONALS, WHICKH WERE MORE CREATIVE.

NO HATE
RTF.
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