Kein, I liked your style, and autenticity in this one. I just think your approach could have been a little more indepth for what you decided to write the topic on. I think that if you would of gone in another direction it coulda been a better piece

Drama, I really liked your piece because of the colors........even without the colors in the fonts you still had a really colorful/ imaginative piece. You came with a lot more elements of poetry such as your onomatopoeias , and allegory which gave great variation and create a sound mental picture to understand what you are thinking.

V/ Dq something good.



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