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Old 05-31-05, 02:01 PM   #8
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Voted For: BlOoDsHoTT

BlOoDsHoTT:

Take Out Ya Brain Its No Use-Cuz Only Blood Gotta Lock On Dis Game...
Found Lame? Dis Joke Got His Name Off Of A E.S.P.N GAME!!!
^nice opener

Old Played Out Concepts No Wordplay Won't Make You Win Fo Shit...
Even Playing Boxing-The Duke Still Wouldn't Be An Offical WIN!!...(NamePlay)
^funny nameplay right there

People Like You Are The Reason RV Turns Bad...
Net Bums!..Ya Smell Bad..A Net Girl Friend Is All You'llEver Have...
^kinda basic but still punch though

People Clown You Just For The Way You Postin...
Now Imagine Walking The Streets?!?..Its Ok I GOT THE POTION!!...(LOL)
^hehe coo bar

I'ma Give You What Most People Wish They Had In There Lids...
After Dis The Chances Of You Moving Is Like Wheel Bound Kids Doing FLIPS!!!......
^haha nice wordplay in ya closer

Overall good battle, had some nice punches, some were kinda played but they still hit though. Some personal touches here and there which gave battle extra sumthing. Vocab was coo as well as flow n structure, just a solid drop...

the_DukE:

this nigga made a mistake, thinkin he could battle me/
usually, i sell tickets, but imma merk yo ass for free//
^okay opener

spittin hollow tip rounds, send ya body to the earth/
when im through, imma make this nigga wanna go to church//
^kinda self-glorification right here

send out the search, cuz this niggaz gone missin/
my flow like mike jones, 4-4's im still tippin//
^same as previous bar...

straight rippin, on the mic like you thought my name was grim/
you couldnt win this battle even if ya name was slim//
^coo lines

just admit it man, my flow is hot, it makes ya feel like dyin/
the only reason you bloodshot is cuz i sent ya home cryin//
^best line is ya closer for sure

Aight battle, downside of ya verse be the self-glorification though, try to focus more on opponent than on yaself next time you kno (no hate btw). Flow was good though, feeling ya vocab and structure. Last line was dope bar, got some punches in there that worked out well...just try to stay more consistent with em next time aight...
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