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Old 05-31-05, 02:10 PM   #16
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imma school this child,he just a myth from tha good book.....
new to r.v dogg nice title,lets me now that your shook......
^coo opener, personal one

u winnin is unlikely,like martin luther in tha klan.....
quit while u ahead,go home and re-think your plan....
^nice wordplay right here

kid i got your style pegged,wacker than jon cena rappin.....
and dont use no fuckin gun-play,cause we all know u actin....
^coo closer

Solid drop right here, stayed nice consistent with wordplay turning it into punches, got few personal touches in there and ya flow be very good. Structure's coo as well as ya vocab.


Zechariah:

He's Living In An Imaginative, World, But Yo Ghost Don't-Exist
I'm Murdering You And Getting Away With It Like The Pope-Kid
^first line dope personal, second self-glorification

I'll Poke-in Your Throat-An Leave You Stranded With No-Prints
Hope-This Is Your Plan Of Retiring,Just Make Your Will Note-Kid
^wordplay's nice

Bastard, Get Yo Ass-Kicked, You With Guns Of Plastic & Plaster
This Battle Was Finished Before It Begun Kid One Kid I'm Casper*
^coo closer

In every bar you had a different strong aspect, first en last nameplay but self-glorification too, second bar focussed on wordplay. Good punches, not always too creative but aight. Flow was so-so, vocab was better and structure was coo...rhyme words were more complex than usual battles on here...
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