Odi et Amo
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Nice poem right here, I love how you kept using the same build up for every part of the piece and went more into detail at every next step. It read very easily due to the pure yet raw emotion that gave the poem a sense of looking back happily, of reminising the good old days. Imagery was good as well, could picture different scenes within my mind throughout your words...
Lovely drop...
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