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Old 05-31-05, 02:53 PM   #8
Sean Gunner
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Voted For: Chief

Ok, chief won this with his first 2 bars.

Josh: Weak punches, no real personals, and a lot of self glorification. You need to elevate fast man. No wordplay, just crappy multis and a bad flow. I liked nothing in this verse.

Chief: Decent verse, a few good wordplays, decent punches and personals. Your closer was kinda funny to me, but you need to work on ya wording. Your verses could be a lot better if your wording was switched around.

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