Voted For: Lay-Text

aiighht this was a pretty good battle. I don't really look at topicals, but this was a good read.

Lay-text, you had good metaphors in this. And your vocab, wit some multi's was good to read. Vocab was real good, and you threw in a few multi's. I like how you did the topic, talkin' about fallen hip-hop icons and current ones as well. Real nice. 9/10

Sakim,
You had a read good one too. You had a nice story. Yours flowed pretty good too. You had some nice metaphors as well. Your vocab, however, wasn't as good as LAy-Text. So that kinda cost you some points there. but overall, it was nice. 8.5/10

Overall, both were tight, but it came down to vocab to decide it, and usuage of meta's. And I think LAy-text was a lil better.

v/Lay-Text

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