Yea wasnt dope to be honest
Still good though
Some nice multi use felt if u shortened ur bars they would of been dope though


Searching for self-survival, the shimmering sun's rays doing nothing after its short arrival.
Everyone could hear the sad prayers for family revival, each human becoming a rival.

I liked that though that was nice

But for example about line length
Like a rash spreading before his young eyes, he noticed the purple shades;
the mottled skin rose horrors from his bottled sins, her skin cut as if by blades.

this either needed more multi's or shorter lines in it

Nice drop though content was nice, stay up

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