hmm Macca was good good stucture good flow nice outter rhyme scheme inner rhyme scheme was garbage emotion wasn't really there magery was good though Atticus was probably the best in this good stucture good flow and i liked his complexity throughout the his part the inner rhyme scheme was was and so was the outter rhyme scheme The Rev um i thought his lines were streched and stucture was a little off all though he had a superior outter rhyme scheme and a decent inner rhyme scheme his imagery was good but i just didnt feel it quite much but overall i liked this om. 1

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