Effect on Chorus needs to go......not quite sure what you did, but I wouldn't do it anymore......lol. The best Chorus' I've done were edited like Alcatrakz does in the Alcatrakz Process thread at the top of Audio Assistance ™

I like the concept behind this. Flow was off a little in a few places. Chorus would be dope if you redid the effects. Second verse flowed better than the first. First verse seemed like you were trying to fit too many words or too little or something.......your lines just sounded uneven. Your rhyme scheme would seem all over the place if I never heard you before, but it's pretty original. I also agree with the person that said you would benefit from pronouncing all of your words better. A lot of English rappers seem to get a mumble effect because of the accent.....by pronouncing every single word, you lose the mumbles.

Good track overall, just needs a little polishing ™

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