wow, you really have elevated. you one of the members on here, who try to make their drops better, i'm proud of you and glad to see you dropping hot stuff like this..

favorite set up:
Surprising his mind, which wasn’t divine, he thought was Fine
People speaking behind his back, broke his horrible Spine
Reunited with his family, the strength was only Guaranteed
His grand-children, young little seeds, death was Agreed

nice imagery, vocab was perfect for this type of drop, it flowed well throughout, kept my attention and had a nice story-line.. nice topic to branch off from it got a little wordy towards the end but for the most part it was just fine.
i really am proud of you, good job..

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