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Old 06-01-05, 04:33 AM   #4
Terumoto
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Soc, some parts seemed a little bit forced.. Like you lost presence when sayin some shit. Particularly that "motherfucker.... motherfucker" part. My guess is there was someone in the next room or something. So fix those random things and up ya quality and you'll be dope.

pop lacked emotion I thought... ya quality and flow was nice though. didnt lack emotion enough to make ya verse boring, but you need to give yaself to it a bit more and up ya presence.

Other than that shit, track was fine.
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