Voted For: Intermental

I mite be a newbie, but he newer and he wanna test the ultimate "test",
This big_dawg aint big now cos hes battlin Mr. "fresh 2 def",
Ill do what they did to 2pac and ill put you to rest
Im the whole package homie, the player, the game and the ref
Blow de whistle, you out the game, not cos u fouled, cos u lame,
Im hot, sizzling you like acid rain, I got mad flows son which will bombard your brain,
make you scream out the Lords name in vain drivin you insane,
bitch you a faggot, the only action you be gettin is wid man whores,
like George Michael, Elton John and Boy George
all I hear is intermental this, intermental that, and then i hear big dawg shit, big dawg whack,
You nothing to me Im pickin at you like an itch
Step to me again ill turn u from a dogg into a bitch

Not A Bad Verse Dawg, Sum Shit Wuz 2 Basic & In Other Parts U Stretched Lines & Other Lines Wuz Juz 2 Short, So Work On Da Structure & Da Creativity Ov Ur Punchline Ideas & Wordplay, Few Good Hittin Mettas Tho'...Overall U Definately Had Da Better Verse


we comin through wit brass knuckles and flashlights,
you want a fight you gonna get a fight,
durin the day or in the middle of the night,
this aint no story either this my true life,
if i aint got a gun on me you damn right i got a knife,
i rhyme for a livin you think im a be givin this battle to you,nah dog this right here gonna prove,im comin for the top i aint never gonna lose,dont try to copy my style cuz you gonna wake up wit black and blues,have you bruised in places you would never think would get bruised

U Have Da Same Problem, 2 Many Useless Not Hittin Lines, Not Enought Punz In Ya Rhymes Neither, & A Few Lines Were 2 Stretched, Work On Dat & Work On Bein More Witty Wit Ur Punchlines

Vote=Intermental, More Enjoyable Read

Return Da Vote In Mah Signature Or My Vote Will Be rEMOVED

pZ Out, Good Job Yall

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