Same thing u said its currently crew vs crew but all bullshit aside i will leave honest feed:

1st of all, catchy hook, was kept short which is always good and it was def catchy,
Content wise, some fire was brought:

Faggot ass bitches, say they into gangs, blood and crip shit
But you would never go down to the ghetto, cos u cud never make it on tht level

That is very true,

The way you did this piece, it was definetly a direct approach which is always good but i feel if some analogies and metaphors had been thrown in it would of been a HOT piece instead of just a good one.
Also structure wise, i felt that it did flow of course but i didnt like the way you would have two lines rhyming but then on the next line just having the 1st half of the line rhyme with the 2nd then later on having 3 lines rhyme, this is obviously pretty str8 if this was in audio but i feel in text what ever scheme you go with, you should use consistantly throughout as it does harm the flow so even though flow is evident, i felt it could of flowed alot smoother

(returning the favour)

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