some nice flow to this some decent multi usage however always room for improvement as i felt the multis were inconsitant so work on that and it will greatly help the flow
Content wise it was decent, some simple similes, no real complexity
Probably ur best line

My harmony scripts are like army ship their large can’t dodge
Them

Flow was on point an its a str8 simile

Stay up and keep doing you man

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