Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

U Gonna Stay A Free Agent, I Advize DonT Get Ya Hopez Up
''Hot Bills''? Only Tyme U Been ''On Ice'' Is Playin Witta ''Hockey Puck''

Decent

PM'd Me, Sayin ''Dont Duck?'' But Why The Fuck Wuld I?
U Aint ''Alignin'' Yo Texts Rite, Lyke U Only Got 1 ''Good Eye''

Ok

I Wuld Cry, Not Frum Da Challenge, But Frum Da Laughz
U Culd Get On My Front Lawn, An U Still Unsure Bout ''Crossin My Path''

lol nice

''Vote Or Die Niggaz''? Datz A Thin Line, But I Think They Choose Da Latter
U'd Think My Rhymez Wuzza ''Nine'' Cuz Diz Kid ''Runs & Scatters''

Nope

Yo Verses Are Juz Fillers, Dat Makez Ya' Beef Authentic Az ''I-Hop''
Dick Play? U Aint Been ''Touched'' Lyke A Jewish Kid Scared Ov Da Chop

Decent

Ur ''Gased Up'' On ''Root BEER''...So Now U CanT Think Straight!?
Ask Pac ''If Heaven Got A Ghetto''
U AINT NICE! Tho, I Got A Mil Dat God Wuldnt Even Let U Past Da Front GATE

ight

GangstATLANTA? I'll ''Bang-Head-Bounce-ya'' An Do Dat A-Town Stomp
Lyke Yo Cyphers, U Aint ''Servin'' No Punz 4 Uz Niggaz 2 CHOMP

Lol

Enter A Special ED Comp. An Even Da Dyslexics ''Get U Right''
Dey Said....''Wear Gary Colemanz Attire, Then U'll Be TIGHT!''

Lol nice

VS

IP:


I know on da real dis nigga wont come *guns sparkin*
So i'll bust a nut in dudes mouths, so nigga can *cum talkin*

Immature+played

Where did u get ya *game from*...........
yo skillz is like Whitney Houston's weight,you need ta *gain some*

lol ok

So dont fuck wit me,Ill *dish chrome*dat'll leave ya *shit blown*
cause dis dudes got 'less hooks' than a no *fish zone*/

Played

Ya verses u do should be called *drastic flops*
and if you so sick,why u still on da street like *traffic cops*

Ok too indirect though

U will never be a Boy in Da Hood,ridin in a *wax layer body Jag*
Unless u just in da hood white chalk,in a *tax payer body bag*


Str8

N I checked ya old post,i got rhymes to make ya brain *rupture*
Da only thing dat was khaoctic about dude,was just his *structure*


lol ight

Homies rap cuz His John told em, He cant *See this*
Cuz shawty just a fat white boy who cant see his *penis*

Immmatue again

Merk niggas wit guns N *Rhymes*,
to merk ya body N lyrical *Mind*

Filler

To Me Your just another sorry *Heaven Filler*
Cuz If your a Livin Legend Then Im a *Legend Killer*

Needed re-wording could of been done soooo nicely with the concept

True story...You dont know wat *thug bout*, niggas ~act~, *guns out*, blow his ~back~ to his *buns out*,squeese da ~mac~,till it *runs out*,

filler

Put a crome glock to ya *brain N Temple*, *Plain N simple*,
Guns start singin as if it was Shirly *Temple*

lol

N ya fam knows da scenario of you bein *lost...scary*
Now thats wat da fuck u call a *Khaos Theory*

Poor rhyme scheme ok punch


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